It was a
brisk autumn afternoon in the grungy backstreets of Johannesburg. Moving in fits and starts, a draft manuscript
of Charles Stross’ latest Laundry Files
novel danced along the pavement, buffeted by the wind. The margins full of notes, he was undecided
how heavy to lay on the tech and magic. Should
I go all out, from www brain implants to wizards, or keep things relaxed, just
a little social media and a touch of voodoo?
At the same time and place, Philip Pullman, pique on his tongue and
time to kill, was looking for a place to relax into a pint or two. But just as he spied a promising pub, the
draft manuscript whipped up and slapped him in the face. Peeling the papers away and holding them at
arm’s length, he entered and sat down, ordered a glass of bitter, and took a
look at what fate had sent his way.
Immediately intrigued, he didn’t notice when the beer arrived. So absorbed, in fact, he began scribbling his
own notes—character needs animal familiar,a
strong, toothy one—but which? Crocodile? Alligator?... And this one?
Mongoose? Sloth? Pullman so deep in concentration, it took
the man sitting at a nearby table several tries to get his attention. “Hi, my name is Bill Gibson. Looks like you’ve got some run ons, hanging
clauses, and more than a few over-indulgent metaphors there. Let me see if I can’t help you tighten up that
story a little—give it an edge you can cut with, you know?” The rest, as they say, is Lauren Beukes’ 2010 Zoo City.
The above
introduction would seem to render Zoo
City imitative rather than original. That was only half the intention. By setting her story in a fully realized,
near-future version of Johannesburg, giving her main characters singular voices,
and having her own thematic aims, Beukes transforms the tropes and styles of
Stross, Pullman, and Gibson into a combination of her own making. The influences are readily apparent, but the
creation is of its own design—at least mostly.
Zinzi
December is a former journalist, former drug addict, former inmate, now
entrepreneur, trying to squeeze a living out of said grungier side of Johannesburg. Her animal familiar a sloth, the two survive
by running email scams and finding things—the latter a magical talent Zinzi has
for locating objects people have misplaced or forgotten where they left them. Her remit including lost persons, in the
early going Zinzi is contracted to locate the missing half of a set of twins
who are part of the recent pop sensation, iJuci. Using her journalism skills, Zinzi sets about
organizing interviews and tracking down clues, all the while trying to
straighten out a personal life in tatters from earlier life choices. At first seeming a straight forward
seek-and-find, the deeper Zinzi gets into the search, however, the more
threadbare her hold on reality becomes.
Written in
tight, cutting prose, Beukes does indeed evoke William Gibson, Jon Courtenay Grimwood, Pat Cadigan, and other modern stylists whose visions are vividly
realized on the page through acute prose.
As a whole, the novel finds a midpoint between Gibson’s scalpel and the tech
zealousness of Stross. Numerous are the
occasions in exposition and dialogue that provide that certain writer-ly touch
that go far in a reader building trust in the writer. Zoo
City’s details concrete and edged, Zinzi’s Johannesburg comes to life
beneath Beukes’ keen pen.
But that
South African culture is brought out via character is perhaps how Zoo City earns its accolades. Zinzi’s
contract requiring her to interview a substantial number of people from various
corners and niches of society, Beukes takes full advantage of these
conversations to draw out not only clues and hints for the missing person, but
also to divulge poignant details of Johannesburg and Africa beyond. While on one hand it is a contrived narrative
technique, on the other, the manner in which Beukes handles it is so culturally
and socially engaging that one forgets to fault her for simple tactics.
With
echoes of John Brunner’s Stand on Zanzibar, Zinzi’s story is interrupted at intervals with excerpts from
modern media. Featuring book and film
reviews (including the comments section) and social media (like MyFace and
Spacebook—sorry), it also assays video games, ring tones, newspaper articles,
and other ways and means of social and technical interaction. Never applied in ‘internet puppy’ fashion
(i.e. Stross) Beukes displays a subtler imagination (the band names are great)
while showing real insight into humanity’s social side—the icing on the cake
the manner in which these excerpts complement Zinzi’s lifestyle and
Johannesburg as a whole.
But Zoo City, for as wonderful the setting
and characters are presented, combines plot devices in a manner that, though it
may be just a pet peeve of mine, remains a juxtaposition to be reckoned
with.
Beukes’
descriptions of place, technology, social system, etc. do a wonderful job of
concretizing the setting. Though
near-future, the Johannesburg she imagines feels like a real place, the details
tight and gritty. But into this tangible
setting are introduced two intangible elements of fantasy: the animal familiars
and the magical talents of some of the characters, e.g. Zinzi’s finding
ability. Though it’s obvious for the
majority of the novel the familiars are intended to inform character rather
than plot, and thus are relatively unobtrusive, with plot train pulling into
climax station the animals are utilized in a fashion that doesn’t entirely
cohere with the manner in which they’d been employed to that point. Beyond disrupting the mood, they likewise fly
in the face of the reality the setting had been endowed with; Johannesburg
loses its grittiness.
And the
same must be said of the magic. Magic
without limits creates a story without limits, but when part of a story’s aim
is relevancy, you need limits. As it
stands, the text begs questions like: if Zinzi has the magic of finding, why doesn’t
someone else have the magic of invisibility, and if someone can have either
magic, why can’t the antagonist have the magic of impermanence and simply vanish—all
questions that have no place in Beuke’s overall import. Introducing unregulated fantastical elements
into a setting that is obviously intended as real destabilizes the integrity of
the overriding story. Beukes’ intents
remain clear, but coherence takes a hit given the dependency on a plot element
which the author can use to contrive at will.
Cyberpunk
and magic are tough to mix, and as a result Zoo
City lacks synergy. This fact is
particularly evident in the indulgent ending that muddles the proceedings a la Laundry Files. In short it converts what had been a poignant
look at the backstreets of Johannesburg (Benoit’s story was particularly
affecting) into a cheesy genre serial killer beast story. From a storytelling perspective it is
thrilling and exciting, but from a thematic perspective is not only
distracting, but counter-active.
Fracturing the concrete vision of South Africa Beukes created and
undermining the material interaction Zinzi has with the world, the fantastical
elements detract from rather than add to the narrative.
Despite
the muddled usage of the speculative elements, Zoo City remains an intriguing work of science fantasy for its portions
reflecting on present day concerns.
Particularly South African, the novel realizes a superb vision of near
future Johannesburg via a wide selection of characters idiosyncratic to the
region and its issues. Though the
fantastical elements detract from the realism/relevancy of the vision, Beukes’
intents—character study amid socio-cultural commentary and presentation—remain
clear. Written in smart, sharp prose,
one hopes Beukes continues to write in the genre but eschews the pointlessness
of any such Laundry Files milieu.
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