Dystopia is such delicate material to work with. Done well, it quietly informs theme, emerges from the background at opportune moments to interact with character, and does its part to influence mood and atmosphere. Done poorly, it is an in-your-face experience that detracts from the story in its exuberance of imagination and/or proselytizing. Given such a large number of post-Y2K texts use the motif, it has become increasingly difficult for a writer to not only do dystopia well, but distinguish their world. In her debut novel A Calculated Life (2013), Anne Charnock accomplishes just this.
A
simple comparison: Kameron Hurley’s God’s War is DYS-TO-PIA. The author goes far out of her way to make the setting
as black as possible. The futuristic
Manchester, England Charnock portrays in A
Calculated Life is likewise grim.
But there is a significant difference in presentation. Where Hurley takes every opportunity
(paragraph, even) to cram some visceral, grimy aspect of life down the reader’s
throat, Charnock’s manner of portraying a depressing world is rooted in more
subtle ideas. Teeny-tiny apartments,
unsatisfied people, limited freedoms, narrow employment opportunities in an
economically downcast period, drab building materials, the nuanced oppression
of the class system—her setting clings much closer to empathy and relevancy
than Hurley’s comic book sensationalism, resulting in a dystopia with potential
to comment upon reality.





