Good ol'
clichés. In fiction they can be A)
beaten like a dead horse, B) expanded upon to transcend origin, C)
deconstructed for critical value, or D) given enough depth to stand on their
own—legs tottering from the years of accumulated weight, but standing
nonetheless. Another way of putting
this, B, C, and/or D are needed to avoid A.
George R.R. Martin’s Fevre Dream
(1982) goes with tactic D, but it remains up to the reader whether its legs
collapse.
The
offer seeming too good to be true, at the outset of Fevre Dream Captain Abner Marsh approaches his midnight dinner with
the mysterious Joshua York with strong reserve.
Marsh’s fleet of steamboats having recently been destroyed in winter’s
ice, he has little of value, and is wary of the massive sum he is offered to
captain a steamboat, no questions to be asked.
When Marsh learns the full incentive of the offer, however, he jumps on
it—a dream truly come true. A time
later, Marsh finds himself happily plying the waters of the Mississippi once
again. But more questions remain. York confines himself to his stateroom during
the day, has a bizarre obsession with unsolved murders along the river, and his
companions are a little long in the tooth—literally. Little does Marsh know just how much stranger
his life on the river is about to become.
One
of the major tropes of genre, vampires in themselves are not cliché. But
vampires in a tale of the American south, who burn in the sun, who die with
stakes through the heart, who heal miraculously, who war amongst themselves,
and who live eternally, are cliché, and in Fevre
Dream, Martin does not avoid taking his story train through any of these
heavily trafficked stations. In fact, it
would appear he simply borrowed the vampires of Anne Rice’s Interview with a Vampire series, begging
the question: what are the details of tactic D?
With
the vampires left to echo Anne Rice’s (and to be fair, Richard Matheson’s)
contributions to genre, arguably the most interesting parts of Fevre Dream are the steamboats and
portrayal of life on the Mississippi circa 1850. From the grandeur of the river queens to Mark
Twain romanticism, boat races to supplies and passengers, it’s impossible for
the reader to finish the novel without having images stuck in their head of
steamboats puffing smoke, chugging through the foggy night. The vampires may be cliche, but the boats
come alive.
Fevre Dream is structured
nicely; the introduction of the main characters and steamboats, the build up,
the reveal, the calm before the storm, and the storm itself fit the mainstream
action/suspense bill nicely. But the
execution of the story toward the climax loses some of the tight focus which characterizes
the novel’s outset. The main villain and
notion of bloodmaster in particular do not hold up well to close scrutiny,
which reduces the impact of the conclusion.
Another way of putting this is, the major showdown that builds up over
the course of the story could/should have been more tense and exciting than it
was had some details been better organized.
Since I am not terribly well read in this particular section of speculate fiction, what is B and/or C material when it comes to Vampires?
ReplyDeleteI also am not very well read in vampires. I have Stoker's original, three or four of Anne Rice's vampire novels (can't remember exactly how many; it was many years ago), Shepard's The Golden, Matheson's I Am Legend, some bits of Twilight (as much as I could handle before the experiment went awry), and a smattering of short fiction under my belt. That is the extent of my vampire adventures. None of these texts are what I would call strong B or C candidates. I think it's possible (I've seen it with other major tropes of genre), I just haven't encountered it yet - and given I don't really enjoy vampire fiction so much, I'm probably not going to search too hard. ;)
DeleteI read Stoker (ages ago) and 'Salem's Lot and that is about it I think. I considered I Am Legend at one point but that dreadful movie made me decide against it.
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